2013年9月30日 星期一

Direction

     The reason why I chose English as my major is still a question for myself;actually, I am not sure about it that  am I really interested in it or not. When I was in high school, my favorite subject was geography which I was good at, but I did not choose it as my ma in the end .Most  students had a specific direction and goal which can support them for the following big exam in the last year of the high school,but I thought I was still in a labyrinth then, I still could not figure out what i want to learn in the next four years.As the time past,i did not make a decision about it untill the grade was out and we had to choose what we wanted and I made a list that English is my first wish[ for no reason]. Many adults say that if you major in English,it will be a great advantage for looking jobs, which may be a major reason why I chose it I thought.Maybe I also envy those whose native language are not English but still can speak English fluently.No mater why I chose this before, I am a freshman now,hoping I can enrich my English skills on each aspect and eventually find the reason why I choose it and enjoy it during the process of learning.But there are some things that disappointed me a little is that some teachers say a lot of things that are not relevant to the subject too often and I think it's bored,although I still think Soochow University is a good place with a lot of great teachers and I will enjoy the time here .

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  1. Hi Illena -

    Please leave a space after each semicolon, comma and period.
    Please watch out for your comma splices.

    Here are the corrections of your mistakes:
    1. "I am not sure whether I am really interested in it or not"
    2. "choose it as my major"
    3. "in the last year of high school"
    4. "I still could not figure out what I wanted to learn in the four years."
    5. "As the time passed,"
    6. "I made a list in which English is my first item for no reason."
    7. "a great advantage for looking for jobs, which may be a major reason why I chose it."
    8. "improve my English skills"
    9. "However, I still think Soochow University is a good place with a lot of great teachers, and I will enjoy my time here."

    Kelvinn

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